A Hobby of Mine

Hello readers!,

 this week for my reading I got to choose from six options what I wanted to do for my create. I chose to write about a hobby of mine and about why that hobby makes me happy. I hope you enjoy my blog post.   

One of my hobbies is playing sports and it makes me happy most of the time and I fit in with my sporty family well. I have played many different sports but my two favourites are Basketball and football.

I love playing Basketball and Soccer, it really makes me happy. One of the reasons why playing those two sports makes me happy is because I would normally accomplish something. In Soccer I would normally save a goal or get the team a good pass. In Basketball I would normally do good defense or even shoot a goal sometimes.

Another reason why it makes me happy is because it helps me communicate with people better. Before I played any team sports I was really shy and now I'm not really shy anymore. As a girl I normally don’t talk to many people that are the opposite gender as me but Soccer changed that because most of my Soccer team is just boys. In my Soccer team I actually have a better bond with most of the boys compared to the one other girl in my team which is surprising. My basketball team also made my confidence go up a little bit. I actually play in two different teams for basketball, one for the school and the other one Checkers. In my checkers basketball I play in an under 13 team and I'm the youngest so I am used to communicating with people that are a few years older than me which boosts my confidence by a little bit which makes me happy. Normally after a Basketball game or a Soccer game I would get a treat like McDonalds or something which makes me happy.

 

I hope you enjoyed reading this post, have a great day.

Question: do you relate to my hobby in any way?

How to Make a Quality Blog Post and Comment

 Hello Readers, for this week my task was to create a slideshow or poster to tell others how to make a good quality blog post and a comment. For this create task I decided to make a slideshow of it and I made a slide on blogging and another slide on commenting but still in the same presentation.  I hope that you will enjoy reading this. Enjoy!.

 I hope that you enjoyed my slide show and it will help you improve on your blogging and commenting. Have an amazing day.

Question: Did this blog post give you any helpful tips that you haven't heard of before? 

Partly cloudy chunk-5

 Down a little bit from all the other clouds the darkstorm-cloud had been working on his creation ready for the stalk that he loved. The stalk flew in to get his delivery, tired and some of his feathers fell off. Gus had wiped off his feathers, the bird then backed away from Gus, scared. Gus then performed  his magic and made the tiny goat come to life. But the goat ran into the stalk's stomach. Gus then saw him look up to the other cloud in the sky with a puppy  having fun, he was extremely jealous. Peck turned around and looked at Gus scared and Gus handed the package and Peck flew away with the rough goat. Would this goat be too  much to handle for Peck?.                                                             

Question: what do you think i could have made better?                

The accidental fall

 Where: Australia

When: 2015 august 23rd

Characters: Cora, Chloe, Alec, Jordan, Mrs Kat, Mr Gill, Cora's mum and dad. 

The accidental fall. 

The accidental fall

Cora was running to school with her always late friend Jordan, they were almost late for the hiking trip. They almost got left behind. They then got on the bus quickly before the bus left and off the bus went. 

When they were there they were told to stay with the rest of the group but Cora saw a separate path so she decided to leave the group and go on the path. Cora also forced her friend to come with her. She then went walking for a while and they found a beautiful sunset near a lake. Cora asked Jordan to take her camera and take a picture of the sunset. ¨watch out” said Cora. Jordan didn't hear her and fell luckily Cora grabbed on to him but they both slipped down into the dirty mud hole. Jordan tried to climb up the hole but Cora had sprained her ankle. 

The group then realised that Cora and Jordan were missing so they went back looking in all the paths. Jordan shouted out for help, the group heard Jordan call out for help and followed the sound until they found them. Mr Gill called their parents and said to come over. Cora got in serious trouble. Her mum always wanted to stay away from Jordan because she was always getting trouble when she's with him.

Thank you for reading my learning I hope you like this

Question: did you enjoy this and if so what was your favourite part about it?

Joy Story

                                                Joy Story

The boat started rowing, it was a bit slow,  definitely a long ride. Joy was as happy as a fairy. Joy started barking “woof, woof”. Joy was looking around and spotted two purple dragonflies. The dragonflies were flapping their wings, to stay above the water. She was super excited, Joy was laying her paws on the edge of the boat. She was watching the dragonflies fly away, into the cloudy night sky. Jumping and moving around because she was super happy.

 

I hope you like my learning,

Question: do you think I could inprove?

How to make a quality blog post and a nice comment

This week I learnt about ways on how to make a quality blog post and comment ill show you what I wrote down

For blogging

1. make sure you have a catchy title and matches what you are sharing
2. make sure your spelling is correct and your writing makes sense
3. make sure you always ask a question at the end

For commenting 

1. make sure you include something positive as in something nice
2. make sure you add thoughtful its nice and helpful and yeah
3. make sure you include something helpful like tell them how they can improve their blog posts 
4. make sure you answer their question if the ask one
5. make sure your writing makes sense and your spelling is correct

Welcome Nau mai, haere mai ki tēnei taonga

Welcome

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