Joy Story
The boat started rowing, it was a bit slow, definitely a long ride. Joy was as happy as a fairy. Joy started barking “woof, woof”. Joy was looking around and spotted two purple dragonflies. The dragonflies were flapping their wings, to stay above the water. She was super excited, Joy was laying her paws on the edge of the boat. She was watching the dragonflies fly away, into the cloudy night sky. Jumping and moving around because she was super happy.
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